Thursday, 6 October 2011

Practice screenwriting- Eastenders

The scene starts of with Ronnie walking to the back of bar with baby Tommy in her arms and kat is standing there this is giving us an impression like she isn’t interested she just want’s to get back to work.  Ronnie walks up to Kat- It gives us a sense of feeling that Ronnie is in pieces no knowing how to describe what has happened. She is obviously worried of the outcome of this.  As Kat is standing there giving us the impression of she wants to go run her pup she says “What do you want Ronnie, I’ve got a pub full of punters”. This shows us as a viewer that Kat wants Ronnie to say what she has to say and leave as she needs to get on with running her pub.

Ronnie is upset and doesn’t know how to act as the type of language she uses is very upsetting, but as she is trying to explain what’s happened to Kat, Kat gets a bit aggressive telling Ronnie that she should leave saying “why don’t you go home yeah?’ call a doctor, go and talk to someone” this gives us a sense of feeling that Kat doesn’t want to hear about Ronnie’s story as she is to upset about the loss of her baby.

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